Sturecture For Task 1 Table 

1. Introduction – paraphrase lại đề

2. Summary – những ý quan trọng, tóm tắt cả bài

3. Body 1 – Những điểm nổi bật

4. Body 2 – Những điểm nổi bật



IELTS Writing task 1

Introduction: Paraphrase lại đề 

Summary: North America – biggest % Over-cultivation. Europe – Biggest % Total Land Degraded 

Body 1: Deforestation, Over-cultivation, Over-grazing

Body 2: Total Land Degraded 


Some Useful Vocabulary 




Sample Essays 


Dàn ý bài viết:

  • Introduction: Diễn giải lại yêu cầu của đề bài
  • Overall: [1] Nokia là nhà sản xuất dẫn đầu [2] Thị phần của các hãng Nokia, Motorola, Sony Ericsson tăng – trái ngược lại với các hãng còn lại
  • Body 1 – 3 công ty có thị phần tăng – đưa ra các con số/ so sánh chúng
  • Body 2 – trái ngược với những hãng sản xuất còn lại –  đưa ra những con số


The table  compares  the leading mobile phone producers in terms of their share of the global market in 2005 and 2006.


Overall, it is clear that Nokia had the largest market share in both years. While the percentage of the market share of most companies fell between 2005 and 2006, that of Nokia, Motorola and Sony Ericsson rose. 


Nokia was the leader in the global mobile phone market in 2005 and 2006. Its market share  increased  from  32.5%  to  35%.   Its  nearest  competitor, Motorola  saw  a significant rise in sales from 17.7% to 21.1% in this period. Sony Ericsson also increased its sales by just over 1% from 2005 to reach 7.4% in 2006.


In contrast, the market share of Samsung decreased by almost 1% to 11.8% in 2006. L.G. sales also declined, from 6.7% in 2005 to 6.3% in 2006. The global market share of BenQ Mobile fell to just 2.4% in 2006, a decline of 2.5% from the previous 
year. Finally, there was a fall in the  market share of other manufacturers by 3% to 
16.2% in 2006. 

180 words.
Written by Ngoc Bach




Dàn ý bài viết:

  • Introduction: Diễn giải lại yêu cầu của đề bài
  • Overall: [1] Boys 6-11 thường giành thời gian nhiều hơn để chơi thể thao [2] Football được giành nhiều thời gian nhất. 
  • Body 1 – Nói bên 6-11 tuổi 
  • Body 2 – Nói bên 12-16 tuổi 


The table compares the proportions of 6-11 and 12-16 year-old boys taking part in 5 kinds of sport in the UK in 2010.


It is clear from the table that boys aged 6-11 were more likely to play sports. Football was relatively the most popular type of sport for both age groups in the year 2010.


In 2010, the percentage of 6-11 year-old boys who played football stood at 87%, while the figure for the 12-16 age group was slightly lower, at 78%. 35% of schoolboys aged 6-11 participated in basketball, compared to only 25% of the older group. Swimming was the least common kind of sport, with only 19% of both age groups taking part in this activity.


In the same year, the proportion of boys aged 12-16 playing cricket was 34%. Meanwhile, 45% of the other group participated in this sport. The rates of schoolboys aged 6-11 and 12-16 who played rugby accounted for 23% and 21% respectively.

(160 words, band ~8.0)